Tuesday, April 3, 2012

The Powerful Lure of the Haiku

Priya has been learning about the Japanese style poem called a haiku. They are made up of 3 lines each having a specific number of syllables. The first line has 5, next has 7 and the final line has 5. She had to submit a couple for her homework assignment a few days ago. Since then she has been creating quite the collection of haikus. She told me yesterday, "Mom writing haikus is addicting. I'm really into it and I can't stop". I may reference this post in the future when she's a teen and may have other ideas of what's addictive. Here are her most recent poems with the capitalization and punctuation maintained.


Home
Warm and comforting
Keeping us safe in our lives
Earth will protect us

Wonderful Things
Trees, flowers, and life
Oh all these wonderful things
Colors, grass and... Friends

Fort of Love
Fort of love this earth
Spirits sing, We care, Plants give
Surrounded by love

Mountains
Tall figures tower,
Majestically, very high
Up into the sky

Rivers
leaping and playing,
washing through the forest green
Raging Rivers play

Creatures of the Earth
Playing Manatees
Laughing dolphins, dancing birds
Creatures of the Earth

Paradise
Earth; a Paradise
Worth a thousand coins of gold
a place of beauty

The Storm
Winds blow with great force
Thunder booms, lightning crashes
rain pours from the clouds

Sanjay's edit for the last haiku:
The Storm
Winds blow with great force
Thunder booms, lightning strikes down
rain pours from the clouds

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